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Sunday, 6 December 2015

My treehouse

Deep in the woods covered with snow, hidden among towering tall trees, there is a tree house. The windows are as shiny as polished gold. The lights in the house glow like a gold mine of fireflies. The varnish gives the wood a golden glow. The snow around the tree is as smooth as a soft and silky blanket. The air is cold and chilly. When the door opens a blast of warm air floods out.

The fire in the brass metal fireplace leaps up and down and sounds like an old radio cracking. There are no distractions thanks to the thick windows. A glistening sun settles over the sea. And not a cloud for miles. Back inside the glinting lights illuminate the room like turning on a torch in a pitch black room. The temperature inside is not too hot and not too cold. There are see through stairs that lead to the kitchen.

In the kitchen and dining area there is a little room up top with an en suite. There's a smooth wooden kitchen with a big curve on the end that allows lots of room to cool. It's got a 100 star microwave, freezer, & stove. It has heaps of drawers for 1000$ kitchen equipment. Sitting on top of the bar is a floating wine bottle with ginger beer in it. If you take it away to drink it and a new one appears. Next to the bar are floating seats. They're so comfortable it's like sitting on marshmallows.

There's also a trophy room/memory room with lots of pictures and some old toys. The picture frames are as shiny as pearls. There's also a chocolate fountain there too. The chocolate spits out into a small pool for scooping up some lovely tasty chocolate with a cup. Upstairs there's a hot spa with blasters you can lie there and relax. Behind the spa there's a juice dispenser with 20 different flavours. The room is 100% gold.

The shape of the bedroom is like an egg. Windows slope up on an angle because of the unique shape of the room. Beside the bed there is an egg shaped window to look out of and see nature. At the end of the bed there is a 80 inch tv with an Xbox and a PlayStation connected to it and a desk that has a personal computer on it for games. The duvet on the bed is white with two dark bull racing stripes down it like a race car. It's really comfortable like sleeping on a cloud. Just push a button and the bed is made.

This is the treehouse I would love and I'm going there today.


  1. I can really connect with this and I love how you have described it I am there as I read it is absolutely amazing. You are a great writer!

  2. It's a long but AWESOME pecie of writing
    LOVE IT!

  3. I like the way you used discriptave words in your writing. I liked it the discriptave words you used in the first paragraph. Well done